VIEWS OF A READER ON “TWIST OF FATES”
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Luisita Palao
"luisita palao" luisitamalouroca@yahoo.com
Hi, Mr. Shauq,
Hope you will not mind if my words are little harsh and bitter but I’ll try to share of my idea … here goes:
A NEW DAWN = it reminds the reader that what ever is happening in your world, always there is something better that will come out of the bad situation u are in at the moment. it's about HOPE…and supposed to be the brightened way leads to souls and hearts.
BROKEN BRANCHES = life is cruel, life goes on with or without u, it never stops to allow u to keep when u stumble and fall. u are left alone to pick up the pieces. The idea of this poem addresses the upper and lower classes and there is criticism of the role of rich people towards poor.
DEAD FOOT STEPS = people have to make a difference in their life, make your life worthwhile/meaningful for others and yours. don't just exist, live your life to the fullest or end up like the foot steps in the sand where the wind blows it away. make a good mark no matter how small it may seem, you'll never know it might do a lot of good to others. It's a touchy and very good poem.
FIRE AND WATER = it's compared to having to choose right from wrong, short or long, big and small ... these are parallels in life. there is always a choice that a person has to make in his life time. Poem indicates the extreme of love and hate.
WALKING DEAD = like Dead Foot Steps, make life meaningful for yourself and others. But what makes me sensitize is the theme of poem which make me thinking. well done Mr. Poet for the old idea expressing in an innovative style. Appreciate you for it.
FRIEND OR ENEMY = yes, Mr. Shauq, it is difficult to please everybody in this cheotic world. best to be just yourself. life is difficult as it is never allow people to influence your decision. just remain true to yourself is the key. this is what this poem is reaching out to readers.
WIDE OPEN EYES = these poem brought tears to my eyes. it described the untold sufferings of the less fortunate. the widening gap between the rich and the poor. and how people has become so caught up in their job to even stop, look and listen or admire their surroundings. Well done Mr. Afzal, it's a great poem.
LONELY MOMENTS = the reader is reminded to always aim to reach your goals, not to be sidetack. pick yourself up when u stumble.
HUNDREDS OF FACES = to follow ill send you the rest.. a good poem showing your way of making friends for satisfying your soul which is based of the desires making you a social activist and searcher for good faces and people as well.
Mr. Afzal Shauq, I will be criticizing your whole poems in the same way to let you know what you did? and what's the value of your thoughts and themes of life?
Good luck and long life my friend...
LUISITA PALAO
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"luisita palao" luisitamalouroca@yahoo.com
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